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Differentia Story part II by ~MVKISMASTAR:iconMVKISMASTAR:



I nearly stumble over wreckage and rubble as I venture forth from my resting place. Resting place, funny I should call it that… I awake from my “resting place” to begin a new day, to awake from the sleep that was my old life. I’m amused by own ignorance. This new… life… is hardly that. This all seems so surreal. My sight, I almost forgot, I must be getting used to it. I still can only see outlines of what used to be such a vivid perception. Fire is still fire, metal still metal, but color and texture are nonexistent, forced to become unimportant and forgotten.
     I’m lost in thought again, I find that all I have done since this apocalyptic endeavor is think. I think about the mountain of rubble. I think of this onslaught of broken buildings as a flood. I remember, the bible, a story of a man who built a boat and survived a flood that covered the entire world. Days passed, and afterwards, the man found himself alive, on top of a mountaintop. This man and his family then repopulated the Earth, a new Earth, purged of sin. Maybe this is how things have played out. I am that man, I have survived the flood, that mountain resting place was my salvation.
     Other survivors are emerging from the surrounding destruction. Their flesh is like mine. One being stands out, though. A man in a long cloak steps forward, shredded fabric dragging dust with it. “I see… that you are newly awakened…welcome to the new world…” he says in a raspy voice. “But… this is not your world… you are on my land… I must ask you…to remove yourself…”
   The others look on eagerly. I begin to speak, but I am halted by the visage of a withered child, he looks into me with eyes of hate, of malice, and this startles me. I can’t live in this broken world…I’m beginning to wish I was dead.
©2005-2009 ~MVKISMASTAR
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Took me long enough to write this... whatever... make sure you have read part 1 first.

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:iconshadowalchemistsu:
very good. i love your style of writing. you have an exceptional way with words^^

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:iconemzilie:
The way you use and arrange words is quite stunning,I really admire the way in which you write

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THANKS A TON! i really really appreciate you saying nice things about my writing... when it comes to writing, im hardly confident at all... :heart:
:iconmvkismastar:
thank you soooooooOOOOOOOOOOO much! :heart:
:icontylerdurdenthx:
very nice,...its really starting to take form. i love you.....(quickly kisses you on the cheak and runs away)
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*beats face with a shovel, then presses it on the stove* ow........
:icontylerdurdenthx:
whoa.... but then he free's his mind and throws the stove....at you!

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I thinks you should be proud of your writing, you have plenty of reasons to be confident about it :hug:

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Yeah, well its crap, crap, crap, crap... I dig crap. This is awesome it just gets better and better. Your juices become more and more juicers, and I love them so much.

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